@KETL17
IDC YALL IM COMING BACK TO TBIS ACCOUNT
I had another wattpad account this couple of months for book content and ong they were so toxic like stop! so I miss my haikyuu babies
That shi I have down is from years ago but just so ppl know I'm alive
Guh thats how I feel. Also nostalgia.
Who's here I wanna know in case I came back
@holyromanDISASTER OMGG hey there how have you been
Do you want me to drop inarizaki book and start something more sane or you want me to complete it
that book has a lot of mistakes grammar and plot that can't be fixed and I have no mode finishing it
But I will probably leave yander theme stories tell me what do you guys think
Hey, no hate and
I don't wanna sound rude but your story is a little confusing for me, cuz of following reasons:
-I have a felling it has no head and no tail (if you know what I mean)
-Y/n seems a little confused cuz she feels loving towards step dad and then the next moment she hates him, same with how team touches her: she's like uncomfortable but the next second she does nothing and feels comfortable
-there is also a lot going on in a single moment or chapter (I think you could separate those things a little and remove some trauma she has)
- there is a lot of grammar mistakes in there and there are missing dots.
I don't know if English is your first language so I can't really judge..
If you wanna have a story looks like it has a little more sense have someone beta read the chapters before.
I don't mean any hate just trying to help and give advice
@KETL17 that's alright everyone was in that phase I just thought to give some advice either for you or anyone else that's planing on writing a story and just happens to see this❤️
@thebook_frog Hey hey I wrote that story 3 to 4 years ago And my English wasn't that good back then but I just published it for my account to do not sound empty so there were a lot of mistakes like a lot so there wasn't anything to fix so I decided to leave it but some people told me to publish it since they wanted to read the ending so I didn't think much of it tbh I am not that good at writing yandere stories either thanks for your advice really appreciated ♥️♥️
Hey guys Its me you probably won't remember me But its fine
Its been around a week since I left but I am back and I will re publish my books
I miss y'all btw
its been a year so I changed my style kinda but its for the better
and if you love anime and haikyuu Talk to me and let's be friends ♥️♥️
happy Ramadan kings and queens <3<33
Can I please congratulate myself (Biden) is now in the white house
Congratulations to us or anybody who love (joe biden)
Hope the best this year for everybody
HELL YEAH. BidenHarris!
Be a bitch to my kid (this lovely user right here) and I WILL start a war❤️
I am old but thank you ♥️♥️
TALENT SPOTTED
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I reached 20 followers
Thank you guys ♥️♥️♥️