@Sumellikaxstory Aww..... thank you so much ❤️❤️ Now tell me where can I improve? Kuch aisa jo aapko laga ki aur better ho sakta tha..yaa ye nahi hona chahiye tha ya hona chahiye tha
@sumellikan_khanak9 ye meri writer id hai waha ek book hai my babyboy you can check that ki mai kaisi pics ki baat kar rahi hu (check ch 39 or something maine waha se pics daalni start ki hai) agar book padand aaye to vote comment kar dijieyga(rone wala emoji)
Ginni ka redemption arc dikha dijiye please and 1 flashback mai hotel wala pura scene bhi(i know i am evil *murjhaya hua flower emoji*) baaki sab to mujhe perfect laga inface aapka writing style bhi badhiya hai.. umm i can suggest ki aap pics use kar sakte ho ch ke end mai ya starting mai like meme type or kuch special hua ho ch mai ... isse readees mai interest aata hai
I love every character damn.. kapil's kid was the cutest.. and i loved ginni's aura.. kapil ki massomoiyat bhi bahut pyaari thi and gini's brothers they were awesome.. kapil ki family and thaat ashram... god i loved evry bit of your book.
Hey! (✿^‿^)
I recently started a story called “Farz" and I’d really love for you to check it out.
It’s about four siblings trying to survive after losing their mother, and an elder brother who slowly becomes their strength, their protector… their everything. It’s emotional, real, and full of small moments of love, struggles, and responsibility.
If you enjoy stories about family bonds, brotherhood, and growth, I think you might really connect with this one
I’d truly appreciate your support and feedback!
https://www.wattpad.com/story/400363395?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=Alexa_kaitz
Hi, I am so sorry for not catching up on your story. I was off wattpad for a month. I will be starting the readings again. I apologize and looking forward to reading again :)