ShrishtiRawat958

Hi! Sorry to bother but can You do me a favour pls. Can you read my book on my id actually I had written my First book and yet I didn't got any respond so can you Pls help me with it so that I can get know that what corrections I have to do in it. It's a fanfiction story. Can you pls help me. Just tell me What is the thing to be corrected. Plss