netranebula2006
Hey KHVSFF in azur key, if sora get a keyblade from the iron blood, do you intend to make his relationship with his rigging shark, similar to james and Victreebel from pokemon, meaning chomping down on his head whenever it emerged from its keyblades to show his affection to sora ? And do you intend to make a chapter, where sora visit each faction and sora tell to each his stories that correspond the most to their faction for exemple:
Country of the Musketeers for the royal navy
San Fransokyo for the sakura empire and eagle union (espacially to reno and San Francisco)
The land of dragon for the dragon empery. And etc
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blackNeoFox
Hey KHVSFF what if Sora gets a new Keyblade when he gets gazed by the Aeons What do you think?
GalyAispuro
Hello I don’t mean to rush you but when are you going to update a certain magical keyblade wielder?
KHVSFF
@GalyAispuro It wasn't necessarily negative feedback. Solid criticism I'd say looking back on it. But the main gripe (which I understand) is that there was too much focus on fighting rather than progression in the story. Moreover, there is also the dislike for me having used *fanfiction* style of fighting for Sora. I originally took inspiration from KH3 mods that enhance his combat skills as well as use influence from other games. These features were "criticized" by some viewers that weren't keen on that, so that helped kind of temper my drive to update the story. Granted, I still blame myself and procrastination for taking away so much time to update the stories. I have also been heavily addicted to MTG lol. But that's coming to a stop based on how things are going in my personal life. I want to update Meltdowner, Astral, Azur, and Lost Key soon. I'm already working on all of the next chapters and taking a step back from fight scenes lol.
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GalyAispuro
@KHVSFF Wait it got negative feedback? I thought the story was really good. To be fair I don’t know anything about the toaru series but so far I’m enjoying it. It’s good that you’re still working on it though and try not to think about the negative feedback that it received. Have a good day
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KHVSFF
Hello!
Thanks for reaching out. I’m still working on the story as it’s sort of last on my list to update.
Over the last year, I’d gotten some albeit small/negative feedback so I felt like I needed a break from that story. Hence that’s when Star Rail story came into existence. But I’m
Not dropping it. Just slowly working on it.
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Aeonshinta
When are you gonna update Azur Key
GalyAispuro
Hey hope you’re doing well
blackNeoFox
Sorry, I hit the sent by accident. I was saying well what happened if Sora was gazed by the aeons in star rail
netranebula2006
Hello how are you doing ?
netranebula2006
Hello @KHVSFF how are you? No problem, to update your work ?
GalyAispuro
@KHVSFF Good to see you’re still working but don forget to take a break every now and then. Your health is important.
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KHVSFF
Hello. Work is moving. Slowly but moving still. The next Astral chapter is a bit… difficult to write on due to me making significant changes. Additionally, life has been somewhat difficult balancing time to work on the stories as well as hobbies.
Thankfully I don’t foresee Star Rail story taking long to finish. Azur key is slowly getting done and I am good there. Along with some short other stories.
Lost Key, Meltdowner, and Certain Key are where I’m having trouble.
But nothing is dead. Just… slow.
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netranebula2006
Hello @KHVSFF, it's for asking in your fanfic like genshin impact or a certain magical index. You make a small story on a specific girl with their protagonist, do you intend to do the same thing, with azur lane or honkai star rail, with sora or selle as their protagonist.
netranebula2006
Personnally, it's would ... be fine to make a omake/Character chapter part of the story as a bonus chapter. Like this people doesn't get confused about where to look for the story, and know which characters going to interact between each other. And also doing like this could show the bond and the connexion between a certain girl and MC. I can't give you a precise answer for what you should do, I advise you to ask other people opinion, and also to look other fanfic, like infinite loner chapter 21.18 and 16, or FateGrand Order: Where All Miracles Begin, SCHALE (side stories) where they made bonus and side stories.
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KHVSFF
@netranebula2006 I don’t see why that wouldn’t the a problem. My only concern is either making the Omake/Character Chapter part of the story as a bonus chapter or making an entirely new story similar to what i do for the Genshin birthday stories. Would it draw in people already familiar with the story or would it be confusing? Granted, I could put in the description that it’s part of the story. Or do I just fine turn a Normal chapter to incorporate a moment or two between a certain girl and MC?
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netranebula2006
What I want to mean it's for example in
Eula's Emotional Birthday, it's was a small story between eula and aether. Or Meltdowner's Blind Date that was the same but between touma and shizuri. I was asking if you going to do the same thing, with the others fanfic you made with sora this time, for example a small story of azur key,
between sora and a random shipgirl (nelson, belfast and etc). Or The Astral Keyblade between sora and a female characters like stelle (not selle sorry for the spelling mistake) ?
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