PattieMchone
On the story of savanna I really liked it at first it was like a dream come true but then what happened di dnt make sence i. Not downing ur story I just think it should of been different and they stayed together and lived a good life because he wanted her so bad and loved her so much I just don't understand why u went with that curve ball it anyway I did love it at first and wish u the best on further storie s...thank u for listening I'm sorry