KJHarting

I feel like the Weasleys' other sister that everyone knew of, but no one talks to because I don't have freckles. 

young_dreamer01

Hi! I just read your story, It Stared With A Letter and it was wonderful but I just noticed a few things. I was wondering if you would be open to some helpful criticism. Don't get me wrong, I'm not trying to brag about my writing skills, I just want to tell you some things I noticed as a reader. If you don't want my help you don't need to respond to this.  Thanks

KJHarting

@young_dreamer01  I don't mind! Any criticism is good criticism if it pertains to bettering my books! Thanks! 
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