The funny thing, The Notebook is a repost. It's a short story and I had such a problem posting it on this watty because the format doesnt support strikethrough... I'm a visual person and the intent with The Notebook is that the story looks like it's coming from a notebook.
Just remember writing is a form of entertainment... if your having fun writing your story the readers will notice (reguardless of grammar... and I"m bad with grammar) I'll try to read more of your story later this week and see if I can tweets :)