Hey lovelies, before I publish CLOVER on Amazon Kindle Unlimited, do y'all think there's anything that's missing from it? I'm almost done with editing, and everything seems fine, but my eyes and your eyes are two different sets of eyes. You might see something I don't, and I would love all the feedback I can get on it. I can take constructive criticism as long as y'all are not trying to be funny in these comments. But if y'all loved CLOVER and feel like the pacing is good and the characters are ones y'all can connect with, let me know that too.
Basically im looking for:
relatable characters
good pacing (not too fast, not too slow)
makes sense