Hey, saw your post about critiquing :)
Could you take a look at all my chapters (5) of my story: "Loved, Cherished, Betrayed?" http://www.wattpad.com/story/7690951-loved-cherished-betrayed
Genre: fantasy/adventure
I'll be sure to dedicate you in my next chapter and read, comment and critique Survival 1
Please be brutally honest! Either comment or post on my message board.