K_Flor

Survival 1 is updated

RonDuberstein

Hey, saw your post about critiquing :)
          Could you take a look at all my chapters (5) of my story: "Loved, Cherished, Betrayed?" http://www.wattpad.com/story/7690951-loved-cherished-betrayed
          Genre: fantasy/adventure
          I'll be sure to dedicate you in my next chapter and read, comment and critique Survival 1
          Please be brutally honest! Either comment or post on my message board.

K_Flor

Okay, I will have no problem critiquing your story. I will just need to finish doing eight other chapters before yours. :)
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