Hello there!!
So I was thinking to edit my initial chapters of "in devil's arms"because the dialogues and behaviour of ishika is sounding so cringe and childish
When I started writing , i didn't expect that people will read my story and it was my immaturity that I wrote it and post it publicly without thinking anything
But now when I read it again i realised that yes it needs improvement a lot actually that time i don't know what was going inside my mind that i wrote some cringe stuff but do i regret "NO" because I was feeling good like I wanted her character to be like this but it became too cringe and ya that's my mistake here
Now when I read it again i decided to edit them not all but ya few initial ones like maybe till 15 it sure , I want you all to pls read them again and comment on them your views and opinions.
Thank you
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Kritika