@KabirSingh808
Like the new cover and also wanted to know the next chapter of the reaction
@voidgod1 will come this month, I made my schedule a little flexible because I am not able to get enough time to write them properly, so yeah Saturday schedule is off from now on
Hey, like the new cover of your Tempest in Teyvat book.
Hello I just wanted to ask if you are ok
So I seems you weren’t well. Very well, take as much time as you need to get better.
Kabir, during Shion's death reaction, can you make the entire reaction room vibrate? Or be afraid? And also Rimuru's aura is also felt on them.
Bro when will reaction story update ?
Hello @KabirSingh808 , you gotta see this meme, so funny ,link is down ↓
Try reading Tensura Melting The Eternal Frost. It's possibly the most popular Tensura fic.
Hello! Can I ask you smting?
How would you rate this Fanfic I made?
?/10
https://www.wattpad.com/story/391845634?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=VordBoi_248
@VordBoi_248 and then there is his daughter Rylas, considering how her past life went before reincarnation I thought she would have been more introvert and detached from others, not believing others easily and it could have been a good plot that Rimuru slowly tries to win her trust by doing some things that he thought a child would like and since he has no experience being a father maybe he would have failed badly and then took help from those who are experienced in these kind of stuff and then as for shion and shuna though I don't know if it is like in anime where they are competing for Rimuru attention but if that is the case in your story too I thought they would have panicked a lot seeing Rimuru daughter and maybe asked too many questions but yeah story is intresting the thing that I thought is lacking is deep emotions and it's expression
@VordBoi_248 I haven't read it completely but here is my take on what I have read so far it seems that the tone of your story is more friendly rather than professional,well that is good since it depends on author how he or she wants to write their story, anyway so story is good and intresting but I feel like the emotional part is lacking for example in first chapter when Rimuru came to know that he had a daughter well i mean she was born from his magicules but anyway the suprise element is lacking even though you write how he is surprised and all but it could have more emotional and deep it finished too fast
Hey, are you going to update the reaction? Or any of ur stories
