Grey9991

Bro I read few chapters of this story and I loved it.
          And I read about that you want some suggestions,that you want to add romantic plot to the story.
          Don't get me wrong i also love that idea,and I also want share my thoughts about this.
          And I am saying sorry in advance because I just read few pages of your story,so I basically don't know you write something about this plot.   
          
          In my opinion you can engage Rimuru in romantic relationship with two persons.
          1.The electro arcone(Ei).In this story plot you can make them work together against the danger and make them closer.
          
          2.The knave (Arlecchino).In this plot rimuru will try to investigate the fatui harbingers and inconture the knave.
          I think it will be easy to engage this to in a relationship. By using Rimuru kind nature and Arlecchino past .
          
          Bro I don't know if you like this idea or not but if you like it then please use it in your story.And I am saying sorry once again because I don't know you add something about this.
          
          

Grey9991

@Grey9991 
            
            Thank you for your repli bro.And about Arlecchino,I thought if Rimuru try to help her with her guit, about killing her friend,then the relationship might take a shape .
            What do you think about it? 
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KabirSingh808

@Grey9991 thanks for reading this fanfiction and as for your suggestions well i can pair ei with rimuru but the problem is that i have already prepared a plot for ei and rimuru fight which i think can mark them as each other enemies for the time being but i will see what i can do and as for arlecchino well she doesn't look like a character who is even a little bit interest in romance and stuff but still i respect your opinion and do what i can
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