KaceyJaceyXD

My best friend is pretty awesome, so any one into 18th century/pirates should check her out! https://www.wattpad.com/story/17027682-piracy%27s-finest

Intricate_details

Hey there Kasey, I was just wondering if you could spare a few moments to check out some of my poetry? Any feedback would be appreciated :))
          PS - You are a great poet - loved reading some of your stuff. I'll be sure to come back and read more when my homework permits haha.
          PPS - Ignore meaningless 'haters'. You are entitled to write whatever you want and should write whatever you want. Don't write for the sake of pleasing someone. And from what I saw - I know you will continue to write from your heart. 
          Many smiles,
          Steff :)

mysunshine621

Hey if you have a chance will you check out my poetry . I normally write it only for my self , so i would love some feed back

KaceyJaceyXD

Not a problem. My main thing with your writing is that it has potential, bu the grammatical errors really distract me. You should take just a minute to scan for general capitalization/punctuation things. Nobody's perfect, and even I (as a grammar nazi) make mistakes, but a little editing wouldn't hurt. :) I left some comments, if you wouldn't mind returning the critiquing favor? :)
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Adriana_Christensen

I'm happy you liked "Dear Friend." I'm actually relatively bad with rhyming but the way that I write poems just seems to flow. I really appreciate you commenting :)

KaceyJaceyXD

I loved it! Rhyming is close to the only thing I AM good at; I'll do it in everyday sentences on accident and my friends just stare at me like O.O   Your poems definitely flow well; I encourage you to keep going. I look forward to seeing even more from you!
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