AdamPure
Can I ask you to read my book? It's a love story. She is beautiful and he, stupid. So romantic and common. But their love story is nothing but common. Find out why. Tell me what you think, please.
AdamPure
@AdamPure ok, well, you have a natural understanding of how to keep your sentences simple, which is good. Most people write complicated sentences and loose the clarity. You should perhaps focus a little bit on your punctuation. It really depends what you really want to improve. You can't improve everything at once. You have to choose really
