Kim Camille

@SilverGemini Yeah I do a bit. I try but, it just doesn't feel right and I opt out of it and yeah. I honestly think my story is a bit bland to be honest.

@SilverGemini the new chapter got me good. what I meant was maybe consider a little bit more emotions to tease your readers (which you actually did on the update) but not to a point where it's exaggerated. ahk! it's hard to explain. but do you at least get what I'm trying to say? >. <

@KaiCee06  Awe thanks. I'm glad you like it. Let myself go more? Does it seem like I'm holding back or something? I mean I kinda do a little that i know of because I don't want to get all rambly and start spouting info that probably isn't needed. Honestly I feel like that all the time with my chapters, like maybe there is too much people don't want to read or yeah.