KailanWalker

You might be wondering where my other stories went? Don't worry, they'll come back. Rewritten. That first one I wrote was supposed to be the backstory of my main Roleplay character, but I messed it up. I also messed up Experimental procedures. But I am working on other stories.

KailanWalker

You might be wondering where my other stories went? Don't worry, they'll come back. Rewritten. That first one I wrote was supposed to be the backstory of my main Roleplay character, but I messed it up. I also messed up Experimental procedures. But I am working on other stories.

KailanWalker

I have just released what is probably the longest chapter I've ever written. Experimental Procedures was actually a story idea that I came up with a really long time ago, and I've changed that idea until I finally got around to writing it.

KailanWalker

Guys, I need writing help. I came up with some ideas randomly yesterday/last night, but I can't figure out how to put it into an Roleplay or a story. 
          
          SO
          
          My character's a human orphan, and he has something his parents have him before they died, a necklace. There are some supernatural creatures living in the background of humanity, and are often brushed aside. Most of them live with the humans. I was thinking that some bullies would take away my character's necklace and tell him he could get it back if he stayed in a "haunted house". There were rumors that a super powerful vampire lived there. As he walks inside, the vampire appears behind him, says something ominous, and as he turns around, she disappears. He backs away and runs into her, and stuff happens, then he's tied up, and then there's this one line she says that stuck to my memory: "Imagine, with a simple touch, I could turn you to dust."
          
          Another idea I had is that my character  could have been her slave In a past life. 
          
          Any ideas/critique?