kritikake

sorry author if i sound rude but i really didn't like your story hearts apart because just because of his accident she forgave ? how is that even justified ? i mean there is absolutely  no forgiveness nd justification of cheating .

kritikake

if u r still there plss edit these make story better because you way of writing is good but idea was a  bit bad
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