Hi, you do not have to apologize. I read the first chapter and have a few thoughts that may or may not help you. I personally can look past some errors, but there are many run-on sentences and errors like that. I also do not like seeing emojis in the text, though some may. Finally, I think you should consider infusing your character’s descriptions in the text instead of in a blurb at the beginning. Personally, I don’t remember the description and it feels odd. For example, if I find out a character has blue eyes, I would rather it be through the eyes of anywhere character or even through narration when it’s relavent. I will not continue reading the book, but best wishes with the writing!
