Hey I started reading the alpha's twins. While it was a great plot, there we're several grammatical errors that threw me off. I also noticed flaws in the timeline. Very good plot twist though. With some editing I'm sure it will be a great story. Keep it up
Want some encouraging words? Write whats in your heart the best stories are the ones that come from the heart. If you stop feeling the atmosphere of the story take a break from it and then come back to it and if you don't feel it then delete the book and start again :)