Critique me, please!

I'd love to hear what you think of my stories, even if it isn't positive. That's the only way I can grow as a writer, and provide you with a better reading experience.

So please, fire away! :-) Even if it's harsh or biting,

Your voice counts.

 

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Disclaimer: Every fanfic published here is FanFiction, I don't own the copyrights to any of the original shows, books, movies, anime, cartoons on which my stories published here are based.

I do write original fiction, to which I own the full copyrights. 

My drawings can be viewed at: h t t p : / / kaizenkitty . deviantart . com (minus the spaces)


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Currently writing a Death Note fanfic. =P

and sort of outlining a Yuri on Ice fic ... ^_^' (should really finish the Death Note fanfic first though...)

 

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The essence of drama is that a man cannot walk away from his own deeds. -- Harold Heyes

The essence of comedy (and melodrama) is that he can.

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My novel is so bad it became self-aware and is begging me not to write it. -- (NaNoWriMo forums)

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A miscreant with coiffed, scented hair, a slender waist, the hips of a woman and the chest of a Prussian officer, with a finely tied cravat, by all girls admired. -- Victor Hugo, Les Miserables (introduction of character Montparnasse)

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One person in a Write In said something like "I wish my characters would stop arguing with each other." hmmm. To me that's like slapping yourself in the face over and over and telling people you wish your hand wouldn't do that. -- Glanzer (NaNoWriMo)

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There's no such thing as writer's block. That was invented by people in California who couldn't write. -- Terry Pratchett