Kaleb_192
The Version of You I Made Up is out and Chapter one will be posted March 2nd!!!
Kaleb_192
Kaleb_192
THANK YOU FOR 100 READS ON MY BOOK I LOVE YOU SM GUYS. YOU GUYS MEAN SO MUCH TO ME AND I WILL CHERISH THAT UNTIL THE DAY I DIE. THANK YOU!!! For your love and support!!
OrphanOfTheUniverse
@Kaleb_192 Yeah, I hope that she chooses him, but at this point I can't tell which direction she will go in. But I guess the fact that you keep me guessing is a great illustration of how superior your writing skills really are. :)
OrphanOfTheUniverse
@Kaleb_192 Congratulations on the 100 reads! You are such a fantastic writer and you deserve thousands more reading your work. Trinity is really turning out to be be something of a tour de force. Chapter Three really turned up the heat and I was happy Nora was finally choosing Maverick. I totally wasn't expecting the interruption at the end and now I can't wait to find out who it was and what happens next!
OrphanOfTheUniverse
Did you see it says Trinity is # 230 out of 1.6k in forbiddenlove stories? When I looked at that category you're actually # 94 out of 1.8k stories! You moved up 136 spots in what, a matter of hours? Plus, you're still ranked in the top ten in many categories including several at # 1. I admit I'm kinda jealous, but I'm also a huge fan because there's no denying your talent is on fire and getting so much better all the time!
OrphanOfTheUniverse
Chapter Two of Trinity is REALLY good! I mean it's getting kinda complicated, both in terms of content and the writing, but it's amazing how the complexity of your writing matches the increasing complexity of Nova's imagination perfectly. I don't know how you do it, but as always, it makes me realize I have so much to learn from you!
OrphanOfTheUniverse
Is it okay to talk about this here, or should I comment on the story itself? We could discuss it in messages would be another option. I'm just afraid I'm bothering you too much.
OrphanOfTheUniverse
I don't think it's confusing so much as Nova's dreams and/or experiences with Maverick, Atlas, and Finnegan - and her feelings toward them - are getting more intricate and complicated. I'm not always sure if something is actually happening to her or if she is dreaming or imagining it. I dunno, maybe it's just me?
OrphanOfTheUniverse
Hey, did you see Trinity is #1 in heartfeltconnections, #4 in forbiddendesires and unconventionallove, and #6 in complicatedromance! Nothing I write ever ranks in anything at all, so please allow me to honestly and respectfully bow to your vastly superior writing ability and your overwhelming awesomeness. Congratulations my friend! :)
OrphanOfTheUniverse
@Kaleb_192 Thank you so much! Truly, you showed me I have a ton of stuff to improve on, so I'd be more than honored for any advice or criticism you have to offer.
OrphanOfTheUniverse
You're very welcome, and you totally deserve such high rankings! Remember when I was giving you unsolicited writing advice when you first started here with Waverley? Kind of embarrassing now that I know your writing skills far exceed my own. Giving advice to an obviously superior writer is presumptuous and very rude, so I definitely owe you an apology. Sorry. I was totally out of line and there was no excuse for my inappropriate behavior. But hey, at least I know the truth and I'm now a huge (and humbled) fan of your work, right? I'll definitely be learning some things from you now!
OrphanOfTheUniverse
Love your work as always, but whatever happened to Nayeli?
OrphanOfTheUniverse
Oh. Perhaps you changed your IG name then because I never see you there anymore. Lots of the Jenna pages seem to be dropping off lately.
Kaleb_192
Read my book Forbidden Desire at 3:00 tonight
Stephanie_Aston
Thanks for the follow!!
Do you mind checking out my books?
fairytales_in_spring
I'm so sorry for plugging in. Hope you enjoy reading my new story and don't forget to vote and leave your comments
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