Kalen Bryce

Don't worry I'm changing forbidden bond a lot to make more narrative sense.
          
          I'm starting with the dream sequence and instead making it a full on prologue along with an Original Prologue for the first chapter. (It was originally a carbon copy of 'Ghost of You') 
          
          While I won't go into detail while in the original you know she a former royal turned Jedi, this will basically make it so there are hints but never explicitly said because I got plans on when the big reveal will happen. And it would work better this way narratively.
          
          I also will explain how Kylia gets the blaster of her dad give it to Padme just to retrieve it again years later.
          
          With additional Tramatic juxtaposition.
          
          The whole story being rewriten because at the time it was just going to be a self insert as a Smoking hot blonde female character into Anakin and its turned more into a What if.
          
          What if a royal member of an original created Royal family on Alderaan was the true chosen one.
          
          What if, An Ancent Sith Lord was cryogenic frozen for 2000+ years.
          
          What if Kylia and the Ancient Sith Lord fell in love.
          
          Also what does absolute balance in a person look like during the Clone wars and just How Fragile is absolute balance.

So while I got A naruto fan fiction in the work I have offically started remaking/remastering some bits of already existing chapters adding more fluid dialogue as well as a total rework of the prologue. Don't expect much ti at least the 18th for the total overhaul of the prologue which will be set during the phantom menace

So I'm struggling in how to properly write or describe Kimiko Kobyashi. I had two idea. The first one is she looks near identical to Kushina. The other idea I been playing with is making her look exactly like rin except her hair is bright red and no facial marks.

The Deserter is dead.
          
          Instead I will now focus on a Shared Fan fiction naruto Universe featuring a single mother Uzumaki and her half Uchiha daughter who isn't named Uchiha or Uzumaki.
          
          And a wholesome Senju Family esc which is based of my actual family. 
          Both fan fiction wip names are
          Kayren Senju & Kimiko Kobyashi referring to the main Characters Kay-ren Senju and Kimiko Kobyashi (Uzumaki Uchiha)
          
          Kay-ren will be published first as its chronologically first but Kimiko will start being published when I chronologically hit the start of Naruto.

I'll write The opening for Deserter than finally. Chapter seven of Forbidden bond will be worked on.
          
          Forbidden Bonds will also go through some changes. 
          
          The first chapter: will change to an own created scene in the phantom menace. 
          
          I'll then go though each chapter to make sure that the continuities errors have been fixed. Tattoine will be one massive chapter. And so will chapter seven. The hunt for information. The dream sequence.
          
          Chapter one of Deserter will focus on Sasuke Uchiha and Kimiko (the protag) a week before the long awaited Reunion arc.
          
          Events of the Kazekage arc will be mentioned in the background.
          
          

So my full focus is on forbidden Bonds and knightfall (part 2) After that I will start on Deserter (Naruto) and its prequel (yet to be named)

The Prologue will get a major overhaul after I finish the book. We will only go up to at least before mortis.
          
          After that part two will be called Forbidden Bonds: Underworld. This will follow Kylia watching over her Kid (unnamed as of right now) while taking assassination and bounty hunting missions as the feared bounty hunter That Quinlan Vos mentioned in my latest chapter.
          
          (Note: Theron will be the main villain for part 2)
          
          Part three (untitled) As of now.

Synopsis for scene Six:
          
          After Kylia reflect to herself how she got here. Our trio on the run, arrive at Tattoine. Where Anakin Skywalker is in search for his Mother.
          
          Meanwhile Kylia has stayed on the ship. regretting some of her actions as a Bounty hunter. While the vengeful Theron Tille is in hot pursuit for his Sister demise.

I rushed the end of Chapter 5, so sorry if I glossed over a lot of things I truly wanted to add.
          
          Instead, I added a backstory to Kylia to further flesh out what happened before the events of Attack of the Clones for Kylia.
          
          I also used 'Pathfinder' from the high republic since they are basically the same as what a grey Jedi would be in Legends. 
          
          Also, Eleanor Piet is another OC. Which will be explained upon more as we get into clone wars 

I'm currently creating a one-shot. This will basically introduce the cast of characters involved in the story. Including an oc from the Old Republic era.
          
          Oh, while at it. We will get a Dagen Gera arc, so this story ties the old republic & high Republic into one 
          
          We already got our first bit of Old Republic mentioned with Reven and Bastilia Shan.
          
          And with the basically jedi survivor story happening during the clone wars. It will be interesting to write.