Kalikadark

Anyone wants to get  their stories reviewed check out this community 
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/373967948

ChelleLynnWriting

Hello! I have finished your review and turned it in to the group manager. I'm unsure when it will be updated, but I wanted to give it to you so you can have your own saveable copy! I hope you find it helpful. If you have any questions or concerns, please don't hesitate to share them with me!
          
          https://docs.google.com/document/d/1E4Iy2YSGe734jqv8JeHiaJ1LCZjCLVqn4302C6XX9Lg/edit?usp=sharing

Kalikadark

@ChelleLynnWriting   thank you so much for answering my questions and requests and concerns
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ChelleLynnWriting

@Kalikadark Reciveved* the review. Not reviewed the review, oops.
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ChelleLynnWriting

@Kalikadark Of course, I will do my best to help you with your concerns! Please know, though, that while you scored low on originality, your genre is one of the most popular and sought-after tropes! 
            
            I'm glad you're looking to improve your writing! Even as a fun hobby, it's always a great idea to try to evolve. I'll admit that I don't know the movie or understand how the fanfiction fits in, but it's still a really well-thought-out story! 
            
            The biggest issue I had while reading was simply too much description and being thrown information at a rapid pace. Such as the second chapter, where Das is taking the tour of the college, you describe almost every inch of the place, and perhaps for it to flow more naturally, only have Das notice things that are relevant to him, or as they come into play. Ex. He can notice one or two things about the space on the tour but then describe it in better detail the first time he goes to eat there. To break it up and make sure that all pieces of information are to further the plot. 
            
            As for a book cover design, if you search on here "graphic shop" I'm sure a lot of titles will come up. For reference, the community you reviewed the review from also has one! https://www.wattpad.com/story/374538675-magic-murals%EF%B8%B1graphic-studio-open
            
            I've recently ordered a set of covers from Sulkytae but they seem a bit busy right now. https://www.wattpad.com/story/379836349-demon-ink-designs-%E2%94%82a-graphic-shop
            
            And other communities typical have shops as well, such as The Rose-Gold Community and their Sakura project. https://www.wattpad.com/story/372102582-sakura-graphic-shop-open
            
            I hope I answered your questions!
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DreamyScribler

Hey dear reader sorry for Posting here without permission
          But if you like reading Indian BL, then please give a try to one of my book "Mine to Love". You might love it. ❤️ https://www.wattpad.com/story/389099678?utm_source=android&utm_medium=whatsapp&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=twinkle1011

Kalikadark

@DreamyScribler, please don't be sorry. I love anything romantic and  lots of fluff, and  I think I'm reading this story  only. I have completed 2 chapters it was nice, dear
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ardant67

Sis, continue the story "surgeons" please ... 
          (｡>﹏<｡)

ardant67

Yeah, sure.. o(〃＾▽＾〃)o
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ardant67

@ ardant67  thank you.. ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡ )
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Kalikadark

Did you like it?
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saiprerana

Hey there!!!
          
          Thank you sooo much for voting on my book, "It's just complicated"
          
          I hope you are enjoying the story. Please do give me feedback and tell me what you liked so far <3 
          I hope you have a wonderful day!
          
          Happy reading and Happy new year..
          
          Bye!!
          
          Love,
          Prerana <3

Kalikadark

@saiprerana  Reallllllly!!!!!!
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saiprerana

@Kalikadark I love BL myself! Anndddddd... there is a lot of drama honestly in the story, like too much to handle at a point, but it's all going to be worth it !
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Kalikadark

@saiprerana <33  will there be a marriage scene or something like that? 
            
            I don't want to sound like strange or annoying but I am big fujoshi princess I can't help myself to ask and pls don't take my words in the wrong way. I loved it to hard seriously and thank you for hearing me out.
            
            Love 
            Kalika
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