krishnaaaaa1111
Hey sakhi ,
Could you suggest any suitable actress for Karna's Radha ma?
I will put her in the character introduction part.
krishnaaaaa1111
@krishnaaaaa1111 Thanks a lot for the recommendation sakhi❤️ I will try to make my writing skills better.❤️ Radhe radhe❤️
KaliptasC
@krishnaaaaa1111 Sakhi, there is a little suggestion from me. As an academic student of Literature myself I believe that the beauty of language of any text really do attract the audience. So it can be a little bit improved. You should make the language a little bit better but try to maintain the simplicity. 2ndly some of the part seemed too fast you can work on it too. Hope my feedback helps. Radhe Radhe ❤