Trisha385544

I just realized your pokemon story animes are base on different anime you watch and another stuff you also watch that why the characters personality and scene are so similar to them that probably includes your another story but Any case I hope you take your time and upload your story it been a while since your last updates from it. 

Trisha385544

And also you should probably add a Research Laboratory about fanmade Eeveelution where Scientists test and take note about Eevee evolve into another new Eeveelution kinds of version type like single type or duel type adding to the Pokédex information this a perfect for Aura since she love and big fan over them including another Eeveelution trainer 

Trisha385544

hello Divina is about your Pokemon stories episode 1 Colours of new beginnings title 
          can you pls replace the both Kanto starters and Professor of Kanto region with the Hoeon starters and Professor of Hoeon if you want because reason is I know they not going travel though they birth/home region but since I thought they form both Hoeon region is a good example for it or you choose to do all region starters including they professor region or they travel friends form those region? 

Trisha385544

and is your oc female the main character of your Pokemon stories why borders to put the Ash Ketchum in your Pokemon stories and can you please do a oc rival for your Pokemon stories and how long are you going plan on upload your Pokemon stories and edits all your Pokemon stories chapter including added more ideas to it and new line 
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Trisha385544

I have a ideas for your Pokémon stories is about Team duo (Cassidy and Butch) are you going let them caught more Pokémon and let them become a successful character on both caught wild and bad evil people Pokémon (without Stone siblings and they friends to get in the way of they mission.)instead Pokémon belong to kind trainer and train them to become stronger along with Sneasel(probably like Meowth can talk like human language but need he own background stories including to rain heself to become stronger learn more moveset unlike Meowth who being in the Pokémon anime series only learn some little bit moves.
            to reach higher ranking in Team Rocket HQ because They boss mention that they are high ranking members 
            And also let them find job and help out to make more money they become seriously more to work hard not to fool around.job like league,Grandfestvial,open up a stall that have food.drinks and dessert(Pokémon food,Pokeblocks,berries,Proffins and Pokepuff,Candy beans),clothes and other items things and stuff Jewelry Accessories and Pushes toy.
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Trisha385544

Including Kanto region battle on TV between  champion and one of the Elite four you can also replace with different region two vs two instant of one vs two 
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Eevee4465

Sorry if I'm bugging you but I was just wondering if you were going to continue your Pokemon Indigo League story? I really enjoy reading it 

Orochimaru_Wife23

@KanadeDivinia263 I'm looking forward to reading the rewrite when it comes out.
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Trisha385544

I just realized something that your pokemon story is similar to EleftheriaYuyaCielo pokemon story the Pokemon Journey through Kanto region book are that inspired by you and I hope you fix some mistakes in your story and I think you should add both pokemon contest or performance seeing you have Aura and Steven for Hoenn region, Zoey form sinnoh region and Alain and Mairin form Kalos region as prize like capsule ball,different types of Seal for both Hoenn and sinnoh and for Kalos are diy kit(like makeup, clothes like dress and accessories for both trainer and pokemon alike.) and for cilan form Unova region prize for him are connoisseur  suff that suit him on St. Ann episode.and I hope Cassidy and butch for Team rocket get a new pokemon and if you like you can also add a Johto contest you see a Johto contest because May have Johto ribbon and EleftheriaYuyaCielo pokemon stories have Johto contest on her story book 2 her own version 

Orochimaru_Wife23

@Trisha385544 Looking forward to the rewrite when it is released. 
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Trisha385544

I understand just take your time and I hope you also work on your character personality like what type is your OC and OOC character are like in your story version and have nice day and if you busy with your personal privacy like stuff you can focus on that as well 
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KanadeDivinia263

@Trisha385544 I am re-writing the whole story- The only problem right now is my character's design - which is a painstakingly slow progress.
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