Kanairyxwrites
Hi guys! :)
Random question! I’m considering rewriting a lot of Vanessa’s POV chapters as they feel a bit “I’m perfect, my thoughts are perfect, and everything that i do/want to do to Evelyn is perfect.”
When i wrote the book originally a few years ago kinda just made her my dream woman. What are your thoughts? Did you find this too?
SiRay31
@Kanairyxwrites Mhm! I love your book sm! Im scared to finish cuz I don't want to leave the characters when you are done publishing will you consider writing another one?
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SiRay31
@Kanairyxwrites Yeah I agree with the other pov, I like it a lot more when she'd have moments of revealing her emotions more clearly, like when she briefly mentioned her assault, it humanized her more and made her other behavior more understandable. I haven't finished the book yet but I would love to her, or other characters you create, make more genuine mistakes. But I adore Venessa so I can't even critic that much on her perspective fr.♀️
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