Hi i really like your story blind mate it's really great. I was wondering if you would do me a favor of checking out my story Newborn and letting me know what you think maybe give me ideas on how to make it better I would greatly appreciate it it's the first time I've tried writing a story so it's a bit rough bit I'm constantly going back and revising it and editing it so please let me know what you think. If you can whenever you have the time to that is again I'd greatly appreciate it, thank you.