Tyagiwrites
Oh wow , just saw my story in crap section. Can you please share your review so I can improve?
Kaoriwritess
@Tyagiwrites The story feels toxic to me. The female lead sacrifices herself for her sister even though the male lead truly loves her. This takes away her own happiness and choice. Instead of fixing things, it also ends up ruining her sister’s life. Even in the second book, her relationship with another male lead doesn’t feel right. He is a single father, and the first male lead never really fought for his love. Because of this, the emotional decisions don’t feel justified.
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