KaraLovesToWrite

My dear people, if you want to read an insanely good chapter that i managed to write in a few hours because my writers block is finally gone...go check out the edited chapter 7 of Lilliana's Fall!

royaltyprinceton1

Plz do not take my critique as an offense but why are you writing a first person's point of view in a third person point of view?

royaltyprinceton1

No problem, seen that i have no other choice, just have to continue reading other books
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KaraLovesToWrite

@royaltyprinceton1 well....then you're going to have to wait until I'm done editing the other 3... ;) enjoy the wonderful character development, deeper plots, and better developed world than last time!
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royaltyprinceton1

Naah, I'm just waiting for an update on Max's Seduction, read all four in one day, they are pretty awesome books, that's why I chose to read instead of sleeping, haha
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KaraLovesToWrite

just so you all know... I've been going though my stories and I've decided they are in dire need of editing. so... I'm starting with Lillianas Fall. the first edited chapter is up. I, honestly, love that edited chapter so much more. the books will get better. just be patient bc I am in college and all... haha