webbiegail
Good morning!
I have a quick favor to ask as you’re reading the first few chapters of What the Hunt Requires. The original version was written in third person like What the Season Demands, but I’ve now rewritten the first five chapters in first person.
Does that work better for you as a reader?
Also, the tone in those early chapters is slightly different from the original version. Does the new tone still feel right for the story/characters? I really value your opinion, so any thoughts you have as you read would help me a ton.
KarenSampson
I think you are really a truly talented writer and both ways works and I think you will give me the clarity of the small confusion I felt in the beginning which had nothing to do with whether in first person or 3rd!
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KarenSampson
I was slightly confused by who were these other characters but you pulled it together pretty well! Her boyfriend from station are you going to show or tell what happened to him or did he just die when station exploded? What happened to his sister who got into a ship oh wait she contacted vi right and crashed I’m a little confused by what’s going on I guess I will reread it and let you know more sorry
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