Hi guys, I noticed some of you, (*gollum voice* my precious) few followers read my little short story thing. Can I get some honest feedback? I don't care if you hated it, please tell me. I'm always trying to improve. Also, I swear I've got some better stuff coming. Im currently working on something I'm actually really proud of, it just has to be perfect before I actually publish any of it. And oops I'm hard on myself so it might be awhile. Sorry.