Hey- someone asked about my switching POVs and transitions. I personally don't like adding the head title, "*blanks* POV" I just prefer reading straight through something like you would a normal book. The point of the way I do it is for you to actually think about what's going on, add the context clues together about who and who isn't talking. It's not suppose to be easy. I kinda of think of it as a way to train the brain to think differently for the better in a way-But anyway I can try Third POV since it's honestly easier. Or I'll just make it more clear about whose talking, and change up my transitions. Sorry if it's been a hassle reading my fic, I can make some changed in the future :)
-Karma
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