byvoid

hello, I have chapter 1 of my new David dobrik book out, would you mind checking it out? I need feedback :)

KarmenVizcaino

It’s really good! Maybe make the character have a first name instead of y/n? I love kinda watching it as it happens ya know? Keep posting!!! I’m excited!!! Longer chapters too cuz when i get sucked in i really really do(:
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