Here's some constructive criticism, sweetie. I've noticed that many of the chapters in your stories aren't spaced out very well. Everything is bunched up together. Feel free to read one of my stories and take note that I've spaced out paragraphs and dialogue. Your ideas are great, but I've struggled reading due to the lack of spacing. Everything blurs together. Hope you understand. Please let me know if you need help. - LV. ♡♡♡