RenaEtiel

These last chapters were wonderful! and I would like to comment on several things, such as: if they gave Lily more freedom, she could create an industrial revolution in Westeros.
           I found Rhaenys and Malerys' reaction to Lily very amusing, I'm looking forward to more reactions from other knights and their dragons.
           Viserys continues to be a shitty father to all of his children.
           Lily teaching and playing football to her nephews and brothers was very cute, and very interesting, because after all there are so many entertainment options besides tournaments, which are very violent, I would like to see her teaching other sports and games to the boys and Helena.
           I'm glad to know that commoners love Lily.

KastheJedi

@RenaEtiel Lilyanna would create an industrial revolution if given the chance, but that would also be bad news for a system that strives on keeping those at the bottom subservient to those at the top
            Lilyanna’s brain is too strong.
            
            Lilyanna is not done when it comes to meeting dragons (I will say that Vhagar is my favorite)
            
            Viserys...... he tries? His efforts are not good, but they exist so I guess that counts (It doesn't)
            
            When it comes to football, I wanted to show Lilyanna bringing more of the things from her 1st life to Westeros, especially those that wouldn't be considered necessary. And you're right, a lot of the entertainment in Westeros is violent, or sexual or somehow both.
            And I wanted to show Lilyanna enjoying these things with her siblings and nephews.
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WhYNotOrange

Is your update schedule random? Just want to know

KastheJedi

@WhYNotOrange ❤️
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WhYNotOrange

Okay gotcha just checking Idc how long I have to wait I’ll reread it over and over
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KastheJedi

@WhYNotOrange Yea, pretty much. I try to update my stories every month but sometimes it takes longer depending if I can figure out what to write
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RenaEtiel

What was the Demon's reaction to Lilyanna being a hermaphrodite? Since he himself mocked Baelor's call for a day as heir. I still have a little hope that the Demon won't be a complete jerk to Lily. 
          Since the three conquerors can now talk to Lily, can other members of the family communicate with her? Because that would be really cool. Or just Visenya, Aegon and Rhaenys?
           Do you plan on writing something about the North, Dorne or maybe other places? Regarding the conspiracy against the Targaryens. 
          If the assassin wasn't an incompetent and managed to kill Lily, would the Dance of the Dragons still happen? Or would the story take another path since Lilyanna existed and caused several changes and butterfly effects in Westeros. 
          Do you intend to include the Dragonseed characters in the story or maybe Nettles? After all, I really liked the mix between the series and the books that you made. 
          
          
          I would like to say again that I really love your story, the way you write the characters, the dialogues and their thoughts is very good and you have great writing, I hope you continue writing Crimson Dragon, and several stories after all you are very talented. 
          
          Sorry if there are any spelling mistakes, and because English is not my native language.

RenaEtiel

@KastheJedi Thank you, you are very kind❤❤
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KastheJedi

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@RenaEtiel 5) I will admit, I have not thought too much on how Daemon will react to this knowledge, but I would imagine that he would try and mock Lily for it (Sorry, but we all know that Daemon is an Equal Opportunity Asshole to almost everyone he meets, and Daemon only knows Lily as one of Otto's grandchildren, so he'll be even less likely to hold back).
            6) Lily is the only one who can hear the Conquerors, and when it comes to other family members, I will be addressing it in future chapters.
            7) I don't know yet if I will write whole arcs focusing on other places unless Lily is directly involved in something there, but I may write small excerpts of other lands and  characters if I think it's important.
            8) I honestly don't know; there are so many variables that have been and have not been seen that it is possible that the Dance could be avoided, or it could be possible that Lily's death triggers the Dance, or even that the Dance happens later for entirely different reasons. Lily has created a butterfly effect, so no one can really know.
            9) I will include Dragonseeds at some point. I mean, you can't have a story with Targaryens without some Targaryen bastards.
            
            And you don't have to apologize, your writing was very legible. Honestly, as a native English speaker, you probably write better than I do.❤️
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RenaEtiel

Hello! I loved this last chapter of "The Crimson Dragon" it was amazing, I'm already looking forward to more updates, I'm loving this plot that has people behind the deaths of several Targaryens since the time of the conquest, 
          I hope he helps Lilyanna even more in the future, I'm excited for Lily to investigate more about this.
          And I loved Croll, he's a very interesting character with a lot of potential, 
          I think it's so adorable the intention Lilyanna has with her family, and how Helaena feels comfortable with Lily and they can count on each other as sisters and best friends, how Alicent and Rhaenyra care about Lily like good mothers, they are loving and kind, Alicent even gave her a cute nickname like "my little flower" and Rhaenyra protecting and defending Lily, and I hope the two stay together. 
          How Aemond and Aegon can count on her to comfort them when they feel distressed or sad about something, and Lilyanna always manages to cheer them up and take away their worries. 
          Also, Jace, Luke and Daeron's friendship and affection for her is so cute and adorable that it makes my heart melt. 
          Even the relationship and friendship with the three conquerors. The affection that most of the Targaryen family and some Velaryon members have for Lily makes me quite curious about what their intentions will be with the other members of the family. I have some questions related to your work, which I would really like to know, but if any of them you don't want to answer, I will understand and I will respect your decision if you don't want to answer them. 
          Will Lilyanna have a love interest? If so, who would it be?
          Did Rosalind take a while to get used to her feminine and masculine parts? If someone kicks her between the legs, will she feel the same pain as if she were kicked by a man? 
          When using the bathroom, does she urinate with her female or male part, or does she use both?

KastheJedi

@RenaEtiel Hey, I'm still glad that you've been continuing to love my fic, it warms my heart.
            I have been focusing on different things, but I will add to the 'mystery' of House Targaryen's setbacks as I keep writing.
            Croll is a background character that I enjoyed creating, and he is definitely helpful to Lily, who has the knowledge/memories on certain things but not the ability to create them.
            Lily loves her family, and one of my favorite things to write about is how she interacts with them (Althought thye are times where I wish to write more about them, but have to continue the other aspects of the story).
            Lily definitely has different relationships with each person she meets.
            
            To answer your questions:
            1) Lilyanna will have a love interest, but that won't happen for a while in the story (many chapters and a couple of years in-universe). I can't say who it will be because I want it to be a surprise, but I will say that it's someone who isn't really used for the Dance of Dragons OCs and that we have not met them yet.
            2) It did take Lily some time to get used to having both, and I plan on adding to this disconnect as Lily starts going through puberty.
            3) Yes, she would feel the same amount of pain as any man if she were kicked between the legs
            4) I haven't thought about how she would urinate, but as I think about it, but I would imagine that if anyone grew tye courage to ask, Lily would take the answer to her grave. (But for real, I think she would urinate through her male genitalia - and that maybe a small amount may trickle from her female genitalia, forcing her to have to sit.)
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