@KatAnne4
I miss you!
@peytonlovestowrite HELLOOO :D It's been a while! I've been crazy busy at work but I have the day off at least, but I'm starting my studying today XD BUT I'LL STILL MAKE TIME FOR YOU :>
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@KatAnne4 that's great, thank you so much for a positive response
Hi @KatAnne4 Thank you so much for reading The Time Gambler's Curse. It truly means a lot to have readers like you invested in the story. Your thoughts and feedback would be incredibly helpful as I work on bringing Part 2 to life. Best Regards, Son N.
could you go rate my book bloody emotionshttps://www.wattpad.com/myworks#:~:text=Share-,Bloody%20Emotions,-12%20Published%20Parts p.s I know there are some spelling errors
@peytonlovestowrite Hey! I mean, I could rate it but I'll have to do it tomorrow, I'm getting ready to go patrol tonight so I'll do it for you tomorrow :)
All the best for your journey :)
Thank you so much:)
For being my first follower and first member to support and vote my story... Your vote really encouraged me to write the other parts of the story
And thank you for the advice, I'll make sure to shorten the paragraphs and check the punctuations. Once again thank you:)
@KhadijaMajid3 You're very welcome, writers should stick together :) And I'm glad I could encourage you to continue writing:D
Hey! I completed the story... Now Can you give the review and advise... About it :)
@KhadijaMajid3 Hey! I finished reading it and I did not expect that kind of ending, especially with Ruby :( She seemed alright in the beginning. I hope Caroline forgave Sophie and they recreated their bond again. And poor David too! :( But over all the story was great, it showed the struggles of a family and the reader could see that not all families are 100% functional - like some books/stories put them out to be. But the book also showed the times where the family came together and supported each other, especially in the end. If I had to give you advice, it would probably just be some minor sentence structure issues where you'd swap two words or where the paragraphs could be shorter / just have a space between them or just some minor punctuation errors - which are mistakes every writer makes. But it was definitely a good book to read, and I hope you enjoyed writing it and completing it. This is your masterpiece remember, and you can be proud of it :). Hopefully you'll continue writing but don't rush things, take your time to gather your thoughts. But I wish you luck on your writing journey :)
Hey Kat,
You’ve been following my story closely, and I’ve really appreciated your support throughout the process. Now that I’ve finished the last chapter for this week, I’d love to get your thoughts on the overall direction of the story.
Do you think the plot is evolving in a way that feels natural and compelling? Are the characters growing in a satisfying way, or are there places where you think they could be developed further? How do you feel about the pacing and tension—does it feel like things are building toward the right kind of climax?
Your insight would mean a lot, especially since you’ve followed the journey from the start. I’m really curious to know if you think I’m heading in the right direction or if there are areas where I could adjust to make the narrative even stronger.
Thanks again for all your support!
Best,
Son N.
@KatAnne4 Thanks so much! I’m really happy you’re enjoying the story, especially since it’s not your usual thing. It’s awesome to hear you’re into Damian’s character and that the suspense is working. Your support means a lot, and who knows—maybe one day I’ll actually take that publishing leap! Thanks again for sticking with it, and I’m excited to share what’s next!
@kadre242 Hey there! Yes I've actually been really enjoying your story, I'm normally not into like, these types of stories but your story definitely took an interest to me, especially Damian's character. The last two chapters were really suspenful and had a good climax. I feel sorry for Damian though, what he went through and everything. You definitely have the talent to become a writer and maybe even publish a book someday. Keep up the good work :D
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