@KatEver_inside Here is a suggestion: I would, if I were you, put a little bit more description for your story than you have. 'A story that will move you...' is good but you need to have a little bit more description than that. Here are a few questions you want to try and answer in the description:
1. Who is the main character? What is his or her name?
2. Where does the story take place?
3. What is the obstacle/villain the protagonist (the main character) is going to be trying to overcome?
See 'A story that will move you is good, but you need to have a little bit more description than that. I know that before I read a book I read the description.
Just a tip! ;)