evacreates

Thanks for adding a bunch of my stories to your reading list! I appreciate it.

KatShipperWolf

Of course! Thank you for reading my message even though it was so long!
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evacreates

Omg, that's a better idea than what I had, haha. If I end up doing another draft of it, I'll definitely take that into account. I haven't looked at it at all since I finished it two years ago. Thank you so much again! Much love to you. <3
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KatShipperWolf

@evacreates Of course! I loved your story 'The Honey-Bees' and I wanted to check out some more books! While reading I at first thought that Lucio, Sasha, Noah, and Sam were, maybe, the magical beings they reminded Nik of, but I loved the story and and the way it's told. My one piece of advice is that when you do a story and in the description you have "myths and legends have been where he's found his strength. To him, real life is faulty and happiness can only be found in the nonexistent." It would connect better with the story if at the beginning when he hasn't found his happiness, or the key to his happiness, he kept wishing he was in a fairy tale or referencing myths or maybe if he saw something or something good happened him thinking or saying that it was like a fairy tale. Then as the story progresses, he starts not doing that a lot, he starts becoming less attached to these stories. It's just an idea though, I love your writing and can't wait to read more!  Have a wonderful day and stay safe! Sorry for the long message. Bye!
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