Just so everyone knows (and because I remember if I already said this), when IVR is finished I will be going back through the whole story and edit the shite out of it. Some of the characters will be changed and a lot more things will be added. I plan to make the story around twice as long as I originally planed.
Also there is the idea in the works for a second story.
I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I do when writing it!!