MarianHawke01

Hello! I just wanted to point out that you really should get someone to proof read your chapters, as there are a multitude of misspelt and wrongly used words (like realise is not the same as release, licking is NOT looking, etc) your snake beast woman story would be much more engaging if I could read it without having to re read multiple sentences just to try and make out what is happening.

mer_236_m

Hii author ( ≧∀≦)ノ
          Just wanted to say that ur story from one beastworld to another is the BEST , I have read in a while  d(^∀^)b  soo i hope u keep writing it and hope u have a good day ヽ(〃´∀`〃)ノ

Katcun1313

@mer_236_m (virtual social anxiety!) Thank you Mer_236_m for your comment and your words of support! I hope you have a good morning noon or night for the days that fallow!
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