Hi! I just wanted to say thank you so much for writing a book like Muddle and Muddled Love. Muddle is honestly one of my all-time favorites I’ve reread it countless times, and I still feel the same emotions every single time. It’s such a special story, and I feel deeply connected to the characters and their journey.
That’s also why I wanted to share something honestly about Muddled Love. I was really excited for it, but somewhere I felt like the characters didn’t have the same depth or spark as they did in Muddle. For example, Rivi who was mature yet chaotic and sarcastic before felt like she lost that spark here. Similarly, Hardin felt much more soft and cute, but that earlier intensity and complexity seemed missing.
It kind of felt like the story was wrapped up a bit quickly, without giving the same level of development or attention to the characters as before. I might be wrong, and maybe it’s just because I had very high expectations after loving Muddle so much but after rereading and thinking about it, this is how it came across to me.
I also want to apologize if anything I said comes off harsh that’s not my intention at all. I truly respect your work and the effort you put into writing. I just wanted to share my honest feelings as a reader who really loves your story and characters.
