Kat

Thank's for the compliment, although I'm not exactly sure which you were talking about as I have many stories. 
          
          You asked for feedback, and I read a few chapters of your book. It has great possibility, yet the writing I'm not really understanding. Maybe instead of putting asterisks ( * ) you could write out what the main character does, as it makes more sense for a novel/story. As for chapter 6 (I think), her conversation with her friend on the phone, you could put inverted commas ( " ) when people are speaking. As I said it has great possibility, and you just started the story so it can get way better!
          
          Good luck on the wattys, and with your writing "career" on wattpad. 
          
          ~Iza

Thanks for the compliment about King's Ransom!
          
          I'll take a look at your story and see if I can come up with any good tips or advice for you.
          
          Good luck on the Wattys!

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