KathrynLauren

KathrynLauren

When you’re tired and get a little ahead of yourself by writing chapter 11 instead of 8… whelp… haha chapter 8 is up now 

KathrynLauren

Totally hear you!! If it’s there: write it!!! 
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WynterButterfly

@KathrynLauren 
            I sometimes wrote my last chapter because I know how I want to end my book. 
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KathrynLauren

Chapter 7 is posted for Of War And Fate, I also added the characters! I have written Chapters 8 and 9 so I’m excited that this story is finding its footing. Thank you to those who are reading, silently or not—it’s appreciated <3

KathrynLauren

2023 Updates: Hello all! First and foremost, sorry for the delay in new chapters but I'm working on a better writing schedule. I'll also be starting to edit Of Death And Dreams (thank you to my @prettyinpunk team—all your suggestions will be going to use) and I also added a prologue to help clean up some of the oversaturated mystery at the beginning of the book and to match up with book 2. Thank you again for reading <3

under_the_stars232

Hey, I was wondering if you could read my new dystopian book World Left in Pieces. It’s my very first book and I want to improve. Comments and votes and shares would be appreciated. I’m looking for someone that could give me constructive criticism. Thank you so much for your time. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/327826633?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=library&wp_uname=under_the_stars232&wp_originator=NIlGA9aTFhHESJ6OnskzIJBlKGczabbZ4kaORp71rqYZ%2FMSlgy51xSqjbG1xyGeroeMyhp7fU3Ef%2BIp6JaI1z4F051OAwsc6f64%2F5EGv7S404aUGNltvS6%2FI%2FFxD7K6H
          

zaliwritesofficial

of 'Of Death and Dreams' is such a great novel, i read it offline cause ads sucks but I enjoyed it so much and im going back to vote now, thank you for writing such a great novel and keep on pushing to write an even better sequel❤️(sorry if the message is typed a bit weird, I'm a bit drunk)

MartinNeue

So looks like I am paired with you for this round on your novel. Which, first of all, congratz on reaching the end! It's always such a great feeling, especially if you've been bogged down for a number of years. :)
          
          Secondly though, what type of feedback are you looking for as you angle for another draft? It's looking like you've gotten a lot of feedback already and I don't want to just repeat the same commentary. Is there anything specifically that you'd like to have examined?

MartinNeue

@KathrynLauren You're good. I just realized now that I don't get notifications for this response either lol. I'll be sure to give yours a deep dive as well sometime today / tomorrow.
            
            Thanks for the response!
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KathrynLauren

So sorry I missed this message. I don’t generally get notifications for some reason! Uhm, I really don’t have a particular feedback I’m looking for. Don’t worry about grammar or typical mistakes as those have been pointed out but I suppose general flow and any suggestions would be helpful! Thank you so much and I’ll be starting on yours hopefully Thursday! Again, sorry for the delay in replying! 
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KathrynLauren

Aaaand we are DONE <3 I finished the very last chapter for Of Death And Dreams! What a journey! 

KathrynLauren

@AmyMarieZ I’m looking forward to revising it! Can’t thank you enough for all the suggestions!!
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KathrynLauren

@darlenerwrites thank you, Darlene!! <3
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KathrynLauren

I am nearly done this next chapter and I can’t wait to post it! <3 this is the second to last chapter and honestly really going to try to finish the book this week since I’m on holidays. Then… it’s time to start book 2! Thank you again for everyone who has supported this story. Without you, I wouldn’t have gotten this far.