@Kathxh07
Aight so for like Chapter 10, that old head is looking mad sus idk if the lady from the cafe and the one who dropped the cats off are desame person but if you said every detail matters there's gotta be some deep lore behind that if you put it in the story, boy tell me I'm right, I'm watching her
hello, reco ng kapatid ko hahahaha, I just read the story and gusto ko lang mag suggest, don't overdo the surroundings kase masyadong mabobored ang readers pag puro surroundings ang pinaguusapan, hindi rin kase ako magaling sa english but your writing skills are good hindi tulad ng akin, and focus on making the lines, jokes and even the style you want, into BL story ako and almost 7 or 6 years na ako here sa wattpad, but it depends if you follow my suggestions kase it can make your story more catchy hehehe sorry for some wrong grammar, write more further heheheh
@Kathxh07 hahahaha masyado akong na atat sa pag vote eh pero natapos ko naman sya maganda naman qnd yes may mga e scenario na feels unnecessary but still the story goes nice and keep going, do with fashion yun lang hhahaha
@fermilism OH AND ALSO, YOU MENTIONED BEING MORE INTO BL STUFF, THAT MIGHT BE WHY THE PACING FEELS DIFFERENT HAHA, THIS STORY IS A MYSTERY THRILLER, FIRST ITS ABOUT SOLVING A CRIME AND BUILDING AN ALIBI, THERES DEFINITELY A DARK SLOW BURN ROMANCE COMING BUT THE ATMOSPHERE AND THE "CLUES" IN THE DESCRIPTIONS ARE A HUGE PART OF THE PLOT. THANKS AGAIN FOR THE PERSPECTIVE:)
@fermilism HII!! A QUICK NOTE ON MY WRITING STYLE, EVERY DETAIL MATTERS. FROM THE CAFETERIA SCENES TO THE STRANGERS ON THE STREET, EVERYTHING IS THERE FOR A REASON. IF A SCENE FEELS "UNNECESSARY", I CHALLENGE YOU TO LOOK CLOSER. THERES ALWAYS A DEEPER MEANING WAITING TO BE DISCOVERED. ALSO WHILE I TRULY APPRECIATE THE SUPPORT, PLEASE AVOID SPAM VOTING HAHA, ITS MUCH HELPFUL TO VOTE AS YOU GO. LASTLY, DONT WORRY, EACH CHAPTER IS PEER REVIEWED BY FRIENDS, TEACHERS OR EVEN COUNSELORS AT MY SCHOOL BEFORE IT REACHES YOU TO ENSURE ITS READY FOR THE WORLD, ENJOY THE MYSTERY!