@KatieMac9 :) Well, first we need to change how the Cullens discover Clarke's secret; originally, she was supposed to reveal herself by thrashing Edward, but this time we could do it in a more interesting way—for instance, they could find out when Victoria decides to go after Clarke first, thinking she’d be an easier kill since she’s "human." The Cullens would then track Clarke down and find her just after she’s transformed and has torn off Victoria’s head with a single blow. Another thing: I think we could have Emmett try to get closer to Clarke by asking her to the school dance, but she turns him down, saying she isn't into that sort of thing. (Which was a lie, since she’d gone to the Beacon Hills school dance with her boyfriend, Bellamy—she just didn't want to go anywhere with Emmett.) Another interesting moment is the Cullens' entrance into the school cafeteria; as Jessica introduces them and pauses at Edward, we see Clarke comment that Jessica should leave them alone and that Edward isn't all that special. Jessica then mentions that Emmett is looking at Clarke, but she simply glances over and says she isn't interested because she already has a boyfriend.