Hey ur wel cum...! :D bt be more precise in detailing stuff...lky create certain circumstances n if ur writing nyone's pov...den do mention it...n m seriously waiting for some cute stuff to happen b/w kat n graham...
@KatieNeilipovitz i think u shud continue dis story...u r obv good at writing...may be concentrate b/w the main female lead and Graham..u knw lky dey being best friends...obv in love bt do not realise it until n unless a bitch or a jerk is involved in the picture *sry for the cuss words*...well m very bad at suggesting...bt u hve charcters in ur story n in my opnion i think u can work dis out...sry if u didn't lky my suggestion..:-)