KatieSanford
Okay so I've redone the first chapter in my 'Desires' story, for anyone who has read that. All I did was fix the grammar and add and subtract the things that I felt necessary. It's not completely different but I hope that these changes do make a better difference. And if you haven't read that story and you are a fan of creepypasta, then I suggest that you go read it and tell me what you think!!