Hey I just read "The New Life of Mine" I like the story line but there are a lot of spelling and grammer mistakes. I type my storys on microsoft word so I dont have as many mistakes, it also helps if you skim over what you wrote before you post it, if you dont have something like microsoft then have somebody else look over it for you.
I'm not trying to be rude so please don't take it that way, i just wanted to try and help:)
P.S. I really do like the story line.