ChristinaValentine7

Okay so after reading the authors bio on 7days she says her stories are based off of her life experiences so I got to thinking that perhaps the author is actually Ava in this story which would make sense why Ava is described as some femme fatal and somehow written as if we should feel sympathetic towards her plight as a mistress and Emily is written as a complete doormat and with the way David is always so mesmerized by her beauty lmao 

KatyKhan5

@ChristinaValentine7  that would make sense, honestly. Emily is practically an NPC (like a background character in a video game, who does nothing and has no agency). It’s so dissatisfying. I truly don’t understand why any author in the 21st century would write such a weakling for a female lead.  I feel like there is going to be a plot twist where we find out David and Ava are soul mates. There is no way he isn’t in love with her. He may not have said the words but he did literally everything else a man in love does.
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