KaurPreet0

@dumbgirl_inlove06  so far I like this ff.  About comment hmm..... I am neither that intelligent nor author to tell how can you improve because you are doing well according to me. 
          But I can try to give you idea. Maybe it works. Just think about this ff.... if this situation in ff, occur in real life. What would happen next .this may help you to  write another chapter. ..just don't give this ff the same  touch as other most of watt pad namjin fanfics .....like unrealistic one . Try to convey emotions through your writing .
          I hope this will help but as I said I m not that intelligent . Good luck