I just wanted to let you know that I’ve read your story till where you’ve posted so far, and I am absolutely loving it to the core. The way you define yourself through your writing is refreshing.
The trio in the story doesn’t feel like a family in the traditional sense, but more like a bond between friends—and that’s exactly what completes it. I have to say, Arav’s character stands out the most to me. He’s simple yet so decent, and it’s hard not to love him.
The mother-daughter relationship you’ve portrayed is beautifully written. Their ongoing conversations show such genuine involvement in each other’s lives, making their bond feel incredibly real. And their talents—Arav knowing to play the guitar and Naina being an artist—are such wonderful details! Those moments have to be my absolute favorite parts of the story.
I’m also thoroughly enjoying the way you’ve narrated the storyline. The mystery element has me hooked, and I can’t wait to see what’s coming next.
Looking forward to your next chapters! Keep writing—you’re amazing.
Warm regards,
Shagufta
